Academic writing style
The biggest myth in academic writing is that complicated prose signals serious thought. The opposite is true: the clearest writers are usually the clearest thinkers. Your job is to move an idea from your head into a busy reader’s head with as little friction as possible. Four qualities do most of that work — clarity, concision, cohesion, and tone — and you fix them in ordered passes, not all at once.
The four qualities
- Clarity. One idea per sentence, plain words where they work, the subject and verb close together.
- Concision. Cut every word that adds no information — most first drafts shed 15–20% with no loss.
- Cohesion. Each sentence connects to the last; paragraphs open with a topic sentence and follow one thread.
- Tone. Formal but human — precise, measured, and appropriately hedged, without being stiff or pompous.
Concision moves that always help
| Instead of | Write |
|---|---|
| in order to | to |
| due to the fact that | because |
| conducted an investigation of | investigated |
| a large number of | many |
| it is important to note that | (usually: delete) |
The pattern: turn nominalisations back into verbs (“an investigation of” → “investigated”), prefer the active voice where it reads naturally, and delete throat-clearing.
Two style myths to drop
“Never use I or we.” Outdated — “we measured” is clearer than “it was measured,” and most journals now accept it (check yours). “Always use the passive voice.” Use it deliberately — when the doer is unknown or to keep the topic up front — not as a default that makes everything vague. Reach for the active voice unless there’s a reason not to.
Edit in passes
Don’t try to fix structure, clarity, and grammar in one read. Make separate passes: first structure (does each paragraph earn its place?), then sentence clarity, then cohesion between sentences, then a final proofread. Fixing one layer at a time is faster and catches more — which is exactly how the free self-edit checklist below is built.
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Frequently asked questions
What is good academic style?
Clear, concise, precise, and well-organised — plain words, one idea per sentence, signposted logic. Clarity over complexity.
Can I use I or we?
In most fields, yes — it’s clearer than the passive. Check your target journal’s conventions.
How do I write more concisely?
Cut empty phrases, prefer active voice, turn nominalisations back into verbs, and delete words that add nothing.
Should I use the passive voice?
Deliberately, not by default — when the doer is unknown or to keep the topic up front. Otherwise the active voice is clearer.